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Omg I loved this so much. I love how intimate it is, how relaxed they are... and Erson and "Buttane" had even just met! The concert must have left a ...

wAIT WHAT. Wait. Okay maybe it's been a while, but I don't remember why Ky feels like she's ratting her people out. Her people didn't do anything wrong as far ...

I see Aleth is AS CRUEL AS EVER. You did an excellent job describing how Ky is feeling during the trek. It was very descriptive and well done, an the ...

OMG MY BABY BOY :SOB: I want to cry, you handled his emotions so freaking wELL. He's such a damn good trooper man, and he's so young, and his priorities ...

Ohhhhh yes, so much has happened here AND IT WAS A SUCCESSFUL CONCERT YAAAY!! I'm super happy Buck has had a successful night again, particularly a successful concert after the ...

So I totally didn't realize it was Cassius who held the dagger, not Cephas. Just a pronoun mishap I think, though. but the fact that it made him feel Tough ...

FOR SCIENCE. omg that killed me. I looove the name Artemesa.

OMG IT WAS BUILDING UP TO THAT ?? I'm so excited and shocked and pleased and excited and I just OMG ERSON IS COMING Okay so first off, I love ...

i have nothing but excitement for this chapter i am also SO HAPPY the rolls did not kill him because i'd have been VERY UPSET MISHAL MY BOY

first off: D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW she made him STEW. I feel like that's kind of a big deal ?? Like isn't it difficult to make stew on this kind of journey!? BUT ...

Bahahaha the setup for this is awesome. I was just as confused about the commotion as Buck and Victane were and almost went back to see if I misread something ...

I love how you ended this. It not only enhanced Aleth's lack of humanity, but he also has more than one way to discipline his staff. It opens doors for ...

OMG this is so exciting!! I realized that you were still planning on another chapter after this, and I think that's a good idea! As exciting as this finish was, ...

OHHH I'm so happy we see shiraku again!

ANSWERSSSSSSSSS //rejoice!! You did an incredible job showing off how cunning Aleth can be, considering how meticulous his actions at the palace were. That really makes him a terrifying character. ...