JabberHut

Hello there! Welcome to YWS! I notice no one has reviewed your work, so I'll whip out my red pen and start markin'! Horizontal shafts of rain muddied the sky, ...

Hey, 3B! I noticed it was up and thought I would be prompt, haha. I apologize for anything I repeat, btw. :D And I'm at school, so who knows if ...

Hello, there! Welcome to YWS! :) I apologize if I repeat anything, but I usually just review straight through. :lol: My stubborn lover, my mistress at heart -- she [s]coxes ...

Hello again! Don't be afraid to ask for critiques. That's what I'm here for! :wink: However, I don't think I can top Mesh's awesome crit there. :shock: Stupid little worms, ...

Hello! Sorry this took so long to post! I had a couple busy nights and couldn't get everything done at once unfortunately. :oops: Grammar and First Impressions His strong pronounced ...

Hey, Mat! Sorry I haven't gotten to posting this straight away. I've been slightly busy, BUT I am here to pay back for all those lovely reviews you have given ...

Hey, Ahoy! I notice JFW beat me here, so I'll try not to repeat anything she's said. I'll just go along with my basic grammar review and comments at the ...

Hello! I was browsing through the forums and saw your untouched piece of work here. Though I'm no Naruto fan, fanfics should still attract readers like me. :) Grammar Corrections ...

Hello! :) Grammar and First Impressions Rosie always heard and saw things. We all know that healthy, normal children see and hear things everyday , but Rosie was never any ...

I'm ba-ack! Sick of me yet? :wink: Before Eating Apples Drink Good Claret for the flats. I never heard this, and I play flute and piano. You'd think I would. ...

Hello! :D Staring forward – staring at nothing, staring at everything – he kept his hands on the steering wheel and returned to the hospital room; [comma instead] re-imagining the ...

I'm baaack! Miss me? :wink: Grammar and First Impressions Rick strode into Drake’s office-like room, [no comma] and then over to Drake himself, who was sitting quietly in a small ...

Hello again! Grammar and First Impressions Fear. Pain. Sorrow. Emotions that so often plagued Drake, he wasn’t quite sure which was which. I haven't found your writing style to be ...

Hello! Comments of previous part's critique Concerning your comment to my crit in the previous part: If you catch a reviewer with questions that will/can be answered later on in ...

Hello! I managed to fit this into my schedule after homework! Woot! :D She gently pressed her hands against the tattered bark of the tree [s]gently[/s]. This sentence is very ...