JabberHut

Glad! It's been forever since I've read this. Hopefully what I comment on makes sense, and if it doesn't, shame on me. :P And because of that long crit you ...

Hey, Ashley! Sorry I didn't get to this sooner. I was out of town the last week. But I'm here, and hopefully my critique will be as helpful as before, ...

Hello, 3B! I lied. I found time to get to this. HAH. You know you love me. :wink: Grammar and First Impressions Excuse any repeats of JFW's critique. I'm too ...

Hello again! Grammar and First Impressions Isaac cleans up our supplies, [no comma] and [s]washing[/s] washes off the counter. I feel his arm brush my pant leg , and I ...

Hello again! Sorry for the wait. I had a few prior engagements to make. :D Grammar and First Impressions He wasn’t there on the walk to school , and now, ...

Hey, Lil' Sock! Grammar and First Impressions The sign read, “Paper Cut; [period instead] ” three tall individuals with pale skin and incredibly sharp teeth were drooling over the title ...

Snoink! Ooh, more FREAK! ^_^ Unfortunately, I only read chapters 1-7 (if that's right)? So, we'll see how much help I'll be, haha. Lord, Snoink, you torture me. This is ...

Fand! For leveling me up to 15 in Sanctum, you sooo deserve this critique. You don't even know how many times I died trying to get to 15. You're my ...

Suz! Grammar and First Impressions Apart from the dust, the only things that occupied Nina’s basement were an old couch with bright-orange flower patterns, [no comma] and loneliness. You don't ...

Suz! Grammar and First Impressions Tuesday. Nina had youth group. Awesome-possum, right there. “Oh, nothin’. I made you somethin’ and I wasn’t sure I would find you or not , ...

Suz! Grammar and First Impressions The burnt red paint on the door was pealing like a flakey scab. Peal : A loud burst of noise Peel : To strip of ...

Suz! Grammar and First Impressions No worries, I've been slacking way too much on the punctuation correction. :lol: So I kept walking because mom had come home drunk with a ...

Hello! I found this before you had to tell me! Aren't you proud? :D Grammar and First Impressions Normally, I would continuously have to clench my jaw and force myself ...

Twist! This is a really good read. I don't want to say too many things 'cause I save my comments for the end. I really am liking this! ^^ I ...

Hi, Thing! Don't normally see your work, so I'm excited to take a look here. ^^ Please excuse my poor poetry skills, and I hope my critique proves useful in ...