JSPike

First off, sorry I've been away so long! I've been rather busy. Anyway, thanks for all the comments! :) They're appreciated. @Curiousvampire: I'm thrilled that you're inspired to look at ...

Thanks for the comment. :) I see what you mean about the first sentence, it does seem like a bit of a ramble. I'll edit it when I have the ...

Thanks for all the reviews guys! Hopefuly it's starting to improve from the original now. :) @Jenna: Sorry about the lines in between the stanzas. There there because otherwise it ...

Thanks again everyone for the reviews! They're much appreciated! :D I've made quite a few changes and everything. Hopefully the punctuation isn't so sloppy now. :lol:

Hi everyone. :D Thanks for all your comments. Soon, when I have some time spare I'll go over it all and incorporate your suggestions and hopefully improve it a bit. ...

Hi everyone, Thanks for all your kind, helpful and constructive comments. :) This is really helping me with this (and hopefully improving my limited poetry skills)! [Changes: 19/01/10] I have ...