JJxVoodo

Hey, I think that this was very good, sounds like somebody else I know Me It was an excelent piece and i would love to read more work like this. ...

Hey, thank-you all for the help guys. I have posted Chapters 2 and 3 as well. I hope you like these or at least think I did better :) I ...

Hey, thank-you for the help on this. I think you would make a great English teacher ;) With the clues they are going to come later on in the book. ...

Lol. This was brilliant. I hope after practice I can be that good ;) I loved it all! Keep writing and good luck JJxVoodo

Hey, thanks for replying. I really apreciate the help you have given me and don't worry, I need you to be harsh. You are helping me and that's what matters ...

Hey, Thank-you for replying. This is going to help me alot. Thanks JJxVoodo

I loved it. It grabbed me in almost as soon as I read it. It is detailed and memorable. Keep writing JJxVoodo