JHall91

This is interesting, a good perspective of what really makes guns dangerous. I especially loved the line "A gun can turn a man into a lot of things: hero, villain, ...

This is funny! A little confusing..nazis and commies in the same time as slaves? Overall, your tone fits perfectly for what your putting across, and you managed to do it ...

Hi! I really enjoyed this piece. The biggest issue is the grammar. There's quite a few mistakes, but as they've already been pointed out, I would just like to compliment ...

This is really creative! Some grammar mistakes that have already been addressed, so I don't need to talk about, but it's a good, catchy intro. This sentence ("...and what are ...

The message in this is strongly put across. You clearly display your mindset, and how your work ethic has paid off for you. Readers may relate more if you were ...

This is very humorous, though unrealistic as a play. I love the awkward familiarity between death and Tom. I also love how death is so casual and seemingly in no ...