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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Kismet #4....flagged for deletion

    Again, I LOVE this. There were a lot of flash-backs, which gave us much needed info, but I'd suggest adding more stuff about what was happening in the present. Other ...

    Jun 11, 2007
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Cinnamon and Pine Needles

    Thanks so much! I'm going to try and rewrite this on Monday, since I'll be away all weekend. I'll also review your stories then. Also, do you think I should ...

    Jun 8, 2007
  • Short Story » General, General Re: What Are Pets For?

    Thanks! And this wasn't supposed to be a story, it's just a quick little scene, so I'm not going to expand it at all. I'm just trying to get back ...

    Jun 8, 2007
  • Short Story » General, General Re: What Are Pets For?

    Thanks! That's my biggest problem with grammar-apostrophes after an s. I'll go fix that, though.

    Jun 8, 2007


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