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This is a common flaw. Capitalizing words that ought not be capitalized makes no sense. It just makes you look amateur. In a romance poem, I may be able to ...

I'll just leave some basic notes (because this poem is composed of basic flaws and little else) -the aabb rhyme scheme is poor, especially when you don't have a syllabic ...

This is worth a 20/20, actually. Take it into context. He was speaking out against communism at a time when communism wasn't hated (unless I'm mistaken--my head is swimming badly) ...

I like this. You don't rape the rhyme, though it is simple. It’s okay to walk through the car park in impending dark. Lampposts and fog make sky look pink ...

While I applaud the general ideas (I wrote the biggest piece of blasphemy ever to grace a teenage forum just last night) this is little better than a church sermon. ...

Broken glass, Whisper your stories. Melt the tears Of cold, dead hearts. Alright. I'm sure you're aware of the defunct capitalization rule here. It's really out of class to capitalize ...