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Re: Complicated love (should I change the title?); Chapter 3 13+
Please write more! Oh, and by the way, your grammar has improved by leaps and bounds since your first story, congratulations!
Mar 6, 2008 -
Re: The Legend of Willow Last of the Silver Fox Demons
it was a good plot, but it could use a lot of grammar help, I'll post the crit when i have time! :D
Mar 4, 2008 -
Re: Due to popular demand a Doki Doki follow-up
I loved this! my only issue is your use of "coarse" instead of "course" but, kudos to a great perspective switch!
Mar 3, 2008 -
Re: Lavender Rose Chapter 3
Hi, I have to say that this story is now on of my favorites on YWS, great job! (and could I be added to the PM list, please?)
Mar 2, 2008 -
Re: Search for Seclusion (Temporary Title)
Hm... thanks for the suggestion, but i think that that would make it sound like all three explanations were true, rather than pick your favorite. Is that me being crazy, ...
Mar 2, 2008 -
Re: Search for Seclusion (Temporary Title)
Is this better, thanks for your thoughts on the first sentence; it was a bit rocky.
Mar 2, 2008 -
Re: "Don't look at me"
This piece was really well-written; at first I was confused as to which one was Katarina and which one was Gabrielle, but it all worked out in the end, Kudos ...
Mar 2, 2008