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Re: Dreaming
Wow! I found this really moving! This bring a dark and troubled thought to mind. My name is IzzyKat and i'm quite new to this too, but I've learnt that ...
Feb 6, 2013 -
Re: 12 Knights Under the Sun
Hi, so far I agree with gineapiggirl, you need to sot out the lines! But I think its a great song, so dont get that bit wrong. Um, I also ...
Feb 6, 2013 -
Re: Dark Blade Army
hi Tizpi! i really enjoyed this story, well, chapter. It was great. Looking through the reviews, most people have summed up the grammar mistakes, (and those are the things that ...
Jan 8, 2013 -
Re: Gone
I loved this! but sometimes i find it hard to determine the relationship between characters. Is this the first, I would recommend either writing more of this (because I'm anxious ...
Jan 7, 2013 -
Re: Why?
I loved this, its great but i felt myself skimming through this slightly... I have never felt like this when i read this! i felt your disappointment, about your ex ...
Jan 7, 2013
