IveGotMyWords

This is absolutely magnificent, in my opinion. I'm a big fan of the imagery you use. Definitely keep it up! Your word choice is definitely skillful. When the story was ...

As others said, very powerful yet simple. As I skimmed through the other comments briefly, I do not know if anyone has said this yet: I really love this style ...

I enjoyed the poem, myself. :P First, in response to what other people said... the line "It was too early to be today" means, at least to me, that the ...

I find the first verse as perfect as I could imagine it. None of the rhymes come across as forced (at least to me) as did in your other work. ...

I like it. It tells a story and there are some things that you describe really well. It's very bittersweet. But I feel like there are some forced rhymes... or ...