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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: In The Beginnings (Chapter 2)

    Hi, I am here to do a review. I love the beginning it is really grabbing but I noticed some really small errors I'm here to address. Amazing writing and ...

    Apr 21, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Equivalent Worlds - Chapter Six

    Hi, I'm here to do a review. This was amazing I really enjoyed reading but I did notice some small mistakes. No offense is intended In this sentence, Safley should ...

    Apr 21, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: The Rift Chapter 2 - draft 2

    Hello, I love this story it was really inspiring and great theme. but i did notice some very small grammar mistakes. Now right here is there supposed to be a ...

    Apr 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Death Mage Chapter Five

    This is a really awesome read. I enjoyed it so much. I did notice some small mistakes here they are. In this sentence- "She heard a soft knock at the ...

    Mar 4, 2017
  • Other » Other, Other Re: That Day

    This is interesting to read. I like the big font. I noticed some mistakes in grammar. All of you "I's" aren't capitalized. Also the sentence, "GoodBye" I wrote on the ...

    Mar 4, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: These Brilliant and Beautiful Lies: Ch3

    This is a great writing and I really enjoyed reading it but I did notice some mistakes grammar wise. I will go in order as best I can. In the ...

    Mar 4, 2017


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— Spearmint