IsProcrastinator

Wow. This was truly beautiful. Your descriptive writing is impressive. It painted a vivid image of the scene and played out like a movie in my head, especially that part ...

Hello! The beginning was really gripping, especially because of the dream. It makes the me wonder, had Jacob gone through some kind of trauma in the past, besides the current ...

Hey there! The setting of the story was nice, like the old house in the middle of nowhere, the only inhabitants being the protagonist and the members of the group. ...

Hey! Wow, you did a really good job describing how the other 'me's were eating the hearts. The splattered blood, the squishing sounds, it played like a gruesome scene of ...

Hello! It's really nicely written, and it sparked my interest at the opening lines, and especially when it is mentioned that she was having nightmares about the man with the ...