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Re: Then Came the Fall. Chapter 3.
Thank-you so much I really appreciate it. I found all your comments really helpful. :D
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: Enchanted Chapter 1
If you get a chance got you check out my Literary Works please. I would really appreciate it. Xxx
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: Then Came the Fall. Chapter 4
Thank-you for your help.
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: Two Seconds
Wow. I really liked the variation on the length of the lines. It was was beautiful to read and it had a great feel to it. It gave me warmth ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Before You Know It
I like your writing it is extremely complex and your vocabulary is to die for. Although I found the wrting very confusing and that made it hard to follow and ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Then Came the Fall.
I made some changges and hope it's better. :)
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Then Came the Fall.
Thank-you both. I tried to make her ease into to it a little more but I couldn't really think how to, so I made it so that the police officer ...
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: Dog Days Gone
I loved the story, it was heart-warming. It was beautiful the way you portrayed it from Chloe's point of view. The writing was amazing, I was engrossed. Xxx
Jul 26, 2011