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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Fighters Paradise Prologue

    I hope I helped you!

    Aug 13, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Fighters Paradise Prologue

    Interesting, very mysterious. I like the last sentence. I like the ideal and were you are heading with your story, but I want more. I want more description. The vagueness ...

    Aug 13, 2017


Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn.
— Thomas Gray