IntellectualBacon

Thank you so much for your criticism! I'll start revising these sentences right away. -Bacon

Thank you for the revisions! I always find that I do an average job of proofreading, at best. -Bacon

Thanks for the critique, glad I could interest you! -Bacon

Thanks so much for the review! I love critiques. And yes, that sounded hella sarcastic, but I mean it. Also, I'll change the rating. -Bacon

Sorry, I know this kinda varies from the original one, but they connect eventually. I originally wanted to make Chapter 2 and Chapter 3 to help relate Sam and Melissa, ...

Sorry if I offended you, and I'll definitely add Ireland to "places to see". It's just a preference as a reader myself, especially since I'm not adjusted to seeing "k"s ...

I can see it, don't worry. You're very welcome. :D Can't wait for the next one. - Bacon

Thank you guys for all the comments (and sadly enough, since I'm pretty bad with this system so far, I'll have to copy and paste this to all three of ...

Thank you guys for all the comments (and sadly enough, since I'm pretty bad with this system so far, I'll have to copy and paste this to all three of ...

Thank you guys for all the comments (and sadly enough, since I'm pretty bad with this system so far, I'll have to copy and paste this to all three of ...