Insomnia

Thanks, to both of you. :) Sorry about the info dumping. it seems to be a thing of mine when I'm writing in first person. In third, I tend to ...

Thanks. :D I fixed the grammatical stuff you showed me. I'm not so sure about the rest of it though. For me, it's not really like george's story. He's writing ...

Um... I will be posting more of this soon! Then I'll look forward to it even more. ;) I was afraid you might not even put any more on. Then ...

Thanks, Sword. I'e just finished smoothing out some rough patches on the story in its actual document, and I'll probably re-edit when I hear back from my tutor. Oh, and ...

Yeah, so I don't know how I can thank you for that huge effot Bubbles, so I guess I'll start by saying... thanks? I've edited most of the stuff that ...

Thanks Meevs, and Clau. :) I'm just checking it before school, but I'll get onto it after work. Problem is, the word limits 3000 words here, and it's already uptown ...

Thanks, Nutty. Looks like I really screwed up those italics lol. I'm still trying to fix them. Oh well, third time lucky. ;)

Thanks Dragon, and Lucy. :) Glad to know it was... interesting? I don't know lol. And Lucy, I'm not too sure it was a cliffhanger, but I think the readers ...

I'll PM you when I put it on Meevs, because there is no chance that it'll be on the front page. Lots of death. Also lots of talk, because conversation's ...

Okay, I've fixed up the stuff you found. Thanks, Twit (not meant to sound offensive lol, do you like to be called Twit?). And I just added in some more ...

Leah told her mother, but her mother is a bit... unstable. Or, she's religious to the extreme rather lol. But thanks for the crits, guys. :) I'll try to work ...

Yeah. I had to sleep in the computer room, so I thought I'd at least do something fun. And now, I feel like reading more. Getting closer to caught up ...

Okay, so this is the totally revamped version of the myth. The credit has to go to sworddance. She worked tirelessly, I'm sure, to help me get this. The result ...

Thanks for all the crits guys. By the sounds of it, I just need to work on Mary as a person, and her actions might make more sense. And I ...

I know that if I found something like this in the bookstore, I would continue, even just to see where it could go from her. Right now, I don't quite ...