Insomnia

Hey, Tyler. This is an interesting piece. I'm assuming that you may write more of it at some point, because at the moment it is essentially unsatisfying. It's not a ...

Hi there, Auteur. I'll get straight onto my nit-picks and then go into some broader stuff. Her earphones were pushed in, so far she could feel the pulse vibrating inside ...

Hey there, Wario. This was an interesting piece. I'll go straight into my nit picks and get to some broader stuff later. Once you’ve seen it all, the sight. The ...

Hey there, Apple. I'm here to give you a review. ^_^ We'll get straight into it. This could be an interesting piece, with a lot of work. I'll do a ...

You! Hi there. xD I'll go through my thoughts by line, and give you my more in-depth thoughts later. If I have any. The air seems tight; almost nonexistent. And ...

Hey there, Fire. This is an interesting piece, and I think I like the voice that emerges as you read it. I'd be interested in reading more of it. I'll ...

Okay, so, I'll point things out as I do my read through and then go deeper into stuff. I really love your opening three lines. They surprise and catch the ...

Hey there, Aspiring. This is me trying to stage a comeback and return to reviewing after like two years. I'm going to ignore the fact that I've tried to make ...

Hi, Kyll. I actually really like this story's content. It made me laugh and it was sweet and depressing at the same time. I love the actual story to it, ...

You are too good to me. Also, you are awful to me. I can never find fault in your shorter pieces. All right, then. Nit pick first. “A great bird ...

Hey, MR. You've formatted this correctly for an all dialogue piece, as far as I know. Unless you wanted to put it into scripts, which is a different forum altogether. ...

Youuu again. Aren't you prolific. :P I am going to get straight into it, because I can, and this is apparently how it works with us. When I’m standing next ...

Oh hi. Since this is me, and you're you, I don't have to be all formal and stuffs. So... story. Yes. That sharp, pungeunt odor that used to follow her ...

Hey there, Life (yes, you should tell me something else I can call you. I'm aware that "Life" is probably a terrible nickname. :P). This is an interesting piece. It's ...

Hey there, Damsel. This is my first time reviewing in an extremely long time, so forgive me if I'm a bit rusty. I really like quite a few things about ...