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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: Story I - Death's Sorrow Over Eternity

    I appreciate the fact that this is an easy read. It's on point and doesn't drag. There are a few things I feel need some correction though. They're just a ...

    Jun 20, 2020


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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