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Re: What Makes You Feel Orange
Ah... Imagery and vivid details do seem to be almost nonexistent in my writing lately. I used to be really good at it. I don't know why I haven't been ...
Aug 22, 2013 -
Re: What Makes You Feel Orange
Oh, I didn't even notice the rhyming in that sentence until you mentioned it! Nope, I did not do that on purpose. I know I need to fix the first ...
Aug 22, 2013 -
Re: The Diary of the Sluttiest Virgin - Chapter 2
Oh this is based off of a true story, sort of? I knew someone who was in this type of relationship before, too. It was like three years ago. Anyway, ...
Aug 16, 2013 -
Re: Unfrozen ~ Prologue
Thanks for the awesome review! The other reviews didn't quite get what I was trying to do in this prologue, but you did! That makes me so happy that I'm ...
Aug 16, 2013 -
Re: Beautiful- Chapter Two
Oh... I feel dumb now. I'm sorry. Alesso could go both ways, so I just assumed. I've been imagining a girl this whole time. That's gonna take some getting used ...
Aug 11, 2013 -
Re: Unfrozen ~ Prologue
Hey! Haha, I do love winter, but the title of this story has nothing to do with winter. I can see how this reminded you of The Hunger Games, but ...
Aug 10, 2013 -
Re: Unfrozen ~ Prologue
Thank you for reviewing my work. I didn't include too much information on anything because a lot of things will be explained in the next few chapters. I wanted to ...
Aug 10, 2013 -
Re: Unfrozen ~ Prologue
To be honest, I never gave them names. I didn't think it was necessary since they don't have a big role in the story. I see your point though, so ...
Aug 10, 2013 -
Re: Unfrozen ~ Prologue
Thank you so much for reviewing my writing! Sorry about the applicant number mistake. It was fifteen applicants before, but I had to change it to fourteen instead. I'll fix ...
Aug 10, 2013 -
Re: Good Ol' Days Description
Your welcome! Lol. Can't wait to read it!
Aug 7, 2013 -
Re: Catching Feelings
No problem! Sorry it was so long! I didn't notice how much I typed. x3
Aug 7, 2013 -
Re: Beautiful
This was so interesting! I like the whole idea of the story, with the whole Judgement Day and such. It sort of reminds me of a combination of Divergent and ...
Aug 3, 2013
