Incandescence

Wulie Just 'cos I don't like your poetry doesn't mean it's not worth presenting. God knows I don't like my own poetry. Put your poem back up. My point was ...

wow. stating the obvious courses really worked for you, huh? what's your intructors name? i need to get this down. i think you and my little brother could potentially be ...

Also, it seemed to have something going on with Dr. Seuss in some of the lines. Just the way the poem itself flowed seemed fanciful as opposed to grave.

I'm not a fan of this--at all. There are no images here. I do, however, like the bit after the line break.

IM me later...but yeah, if I knew more about what the poem's aim was, I'd give better advice. At present, it appears to be a soft obviousness you point out ...

:ogles in deep admiration:

You made the all too common mistake of interjecting noise when there is a really a pulsing silence already there.