In_the_Moonlight

Fascinating...this was a very interesting chapter. Um....the only wierd thing about your chapter is that it sounds a little like that movie I know who killed me . The girl ...

Kenn thinks it will a ‘good experience’. After 'will' you need 'be'. That's probably a typo though. I liked the Hotel part, but I thought it was dragging a bit. ...

Oh, Goody! Thank you so much for pming me; this was a good continuation. I sing lead and play the guitar, my ultimate die-hard best friend, Circe, plays the keyboard ...

No,no. When I talked about the dumpster I meant it was right next to her. I should probably make that more clear. Thanks for the critique and I'll do my ...

I really liked this chapter; it was informative and pleasing to the eye. Plus you didn't ridiculously big words that absolutely no one has any idea to what they could ...

Thank you everyone! I've tried to edit it, but everytime I check to make sure it changed it hasn't. So I'll keep trying to edit it. Maybe it's just my ...

I liked this chapter. It was just a little weird, I mean Mr. Sheldon is just a little weird. Otherwise it was completely perfect, I couldn't find anything wrong with ...

Thanx for the reviews!!

this was... AWESOME! :D

Bravo! This was a really great poem. It flowed, rhymed, and painted a picture. Loved it. Overall: *creative *good topic choice *unique style *detail was good

Jules: Thanx for the review I'll edit soon enough! -Moonlight P.S. I wrote this in the beginning of the year before we had neat freak specht. Your lucky ur like ...

okay so far that is my all time fav chapter for needles and roses.

that was entertaining and suspenseful all at the same time. I can see you writing lots of suspenseful stories in the future.

You had me hooked from the very first sentence. EXCELLENT! I cannot wait to devour the first chapter. :D

This is the most adorable poem and what's great about it is that it states a fact. Stay true to yourself- at least that's the message I got. :D