In_the_Moonlight

Bravo! Im speechless. I loved your poem from the very beginning to the very end. I thought it was witty and creative. The third verse was my favorite. Way to ...

I liked this story so far, but it was really confusing to me in the beginning. I mean you started talking about a chihuahua and then skipped to a whole ...

Bones - Things I loved: *creative *nice detail and description *realistic characters *nice pic *REALLY intense! I can't wait for more! :D hands down that was FRICKEN AWESOME!!!!

I've read all of your chapters so far for poisoned roses and I've loved all of them. You have a great way of developing a realistic character. At times in ...

I totally liked this story. I don't want to be any of those mean members, but just remember to make 2 reviews before you post. I'm happy you posted though ...

This poem at first struck me as okay , but the ending made it great. The concept I got really changed by the end and I understood what the place ...

BSBM : a couple of things confused me and a few things i loved. *who is Wes you mentioned him in one of your other chapters? *is he a friend ...

Apple and a Graveyard: *the ending was pretty suspenseful *I think Caidan should've asked Hope a bunch more ?s. *detail pefecto *cliff-hanger at the end fit the story next and ...

Haha...once again this was a great chapter. Okay so there was so much I loved about it. *started out slow and gradually picked up speed. *awesome *good description and detail ...

The Review: *entertaining *describing *never once did the story drag it was always a good pace. *great foreshadowing. *charcter description excellent *Tobias is a unique name *overall the BEST! HURRY ...

By Sun, By Moon : That was very entertaining. *somehow you found a way to make the story both suspenseful and funny at the same time. *I love how you ...

That was intense. Some parts were confusing like why was he writing? Yet again ya leave me wondering whats gonna happen next. A cliff-hanger. I guess that's why I always ...

I'm a huge sucker for poetry and this poem was awesome. *made sense *flowed *interesting topic, which I think basically says everything on certain lines of your poem. *it's really ...

The story: *great beginning *very descriptive *nice names *a few typos *was she mute or deaf? I didn't understand some parts of the story. Otherwise I think this story could ...

so far I love all of the stories you've written. No complaints here. Although I will say there is just something about By Sun, By Moon, that sets off something ...