Imelda

Still think the spoiler policy should have been made clear on this thread, but then what do I know? I'm just an inept mod ... *Cough* Darklight, I have the ...

Charlie, I'm sure I told you how to format speech at TW. Don't let people's critiques go to waste! Learn how to do them!

I've only read this one book, but I certainly didn't find her characters flat, and her writing, while not beautiful, was better than most bestsellers. *coughDanBrowncough* I don't think the ...

I've read it! It was pretty good, but rather depressing. That's all I remember. S'been a good few years ...

Just letting you know that I'm halfway through critting this. I haven't forgotten about you!

I apologise if any of it was unnecessary, but this is how I've always critiqued and I've never received any complaints in two years of doing it this way. I ...

Thanks a lot, WD! No matter how many times I edit, there are always things to miss. ^^ And thank you , Fuffy. I might well post chapter two after ...