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I like your imagery. It's a nice poem and gave me a warm feeling. One thing though. Please use proper punctuation in your sentences. Someone told me, once, that a ...

I like your imagery. This makes me want to read more, but at the same time I feel like this is a dream. This sentence sounded a little awkward to ...

It's short. I like it. One thing though, even though it's a poem it's good to have proper punctuation. A poem is like prose, they both have sentences. I love ...

I liked this. So Paul is an alien...interesting. I love the image of his agent carrying him to the stage. :D This bothered me though. Just then the door is ...

I liked this in the beginning, but then I got confused. In the middle it took a sudden turn and became fantasy. There wasn't really a hint of fantasy in ...

This is very short. It's interesting enough to make me want to read more, but it seems unfinished. I'm not sure who these people are right now. I read your ...

Wow, E this is.....I could see the entire story in my head. Only one thing seemed a little odd to me...Why would he have a Gun's and Ammo magazine after ...

Hey wonder! Your story seems interesting and makes me want to read more, but I got a little bogged down by your first sentence. My mother always said ‘No rest ...

I liked it. It's very tasteful. If I hadn't seen the tagline that said "For Japan" I wouldn't have know that you were talking about the earthquake. I like the ...

I liked it Arg. Aside from a few things, it's fine. You did leave out a word or a couple of words in this sentence. Opening the dresser next to ...

You have made me laugh. I couldn't get through the entire thing because the names got to be a bit much. I do like the fact that I could imagine ...

Ok, first I think something went wrong with your formatting. Unless you meant for It\'s been six months since it came to be like that? It looks odd and it ...

It's interesting so far. I think you should make a little note about what the time period is. Right now, I get the sense that it doesn't take place in ...

Interesting. This makes me want to read more. Two things I would have liked to know though. What exactly is someone's chi? From what I understood, it seems to be ...

I love your first sentence. It was a really nice hook and it made me want to read more. I like your descriptions of what happened. One thing I would ...