IdaPhillips

Ok, I see what you're saying. That makes a lot of sense, and I'll definitely use that :). Thank you again

No problem at all! I appreciate the imput so much, like crazy a lot. I'm glad there weren't any glaring plot holes that you caught this time, phew lol. I ...

Yep I agree, thanks so much and I'll definately watch out for that stuff :)

Ok, I see what you're saying about the autism thing, and I think I probably will add a piece in the beginning with her and Maurice to clarify that she ...

Awesome, thank you. I will get on that. Obviously a balance needs to be met, somewhere between describing the shit out of everything and telling a story that takes place ...

Hey :), thank you again for the second review! Thank you for the tagging tip, I've got that all sorted out now. About your tip regarding Zoey's weird behavior when ...

Hey again! Thanks for the review :). I agree about the descriptions derailing the narration and with kind of an elaborate world that the lizards live in, that's different in ...

i will be sure to do that, and any future input is extremely welcome :)

Oh gosh, sorry about that lol :) Thank you for reviewing again! It's super appreciated of course. I'm not super experienced with scifi so it helps a lot to bring ...

Thank you, I love sci-fi and humor, so I enjoyed writing it as well. :)

oh my gosh thank you. I've been developing it for a long time, it's nice to hear that people actually like it! lol :)

Truant, thank you so much for the review! This story is actually continued from my The Lizards -Installment 1- where it explains what lizards and vipers are and how they ...

Thank you for the review! I was wondering about how the list would go over, and opted to take it out. Originally I was reading the thing aloud like a ...

Thank you for the review! It means a lot. I've been working on this idea for a long time, and it definitely needs some direction. Originally I was thinking this ...