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Re: The Bear
Okay, I'm sorry for being so picky XD It Really is good O'S TIMES INFINITY XD
Feb 24, 2014 -
Re: Stifled
Yeah... It still makes me nervous though XD I feel like I'm overly critical and correct every detail... I just corrected one That was AMAZING but the author misused some ...
Feb 24, 2014 -
Re: Stifled
Okay.. some people hate it when others review and I was scared I'd offend you :) It really is a cool poem though good job XD
Feb 24, 2014 -
Re: I Was a Marionette
No problem Glad to help :)
Feb 24, 2014 -
Re: I Was a Marionette
This sounds like a song!!! I totally read this like a song... sorry :P I like it a lot... the only thing is at the end... if the marionette is ...
Feb 24, 2014 -
Re: The Hunger Games: After Mockingjay: Gale comes back
You're welcome and I really did like it :3 Keep up the good work
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: Edge
This is amazing. There were just a few things that sounded weird when reading. Um... nevermind I wont tell you. I really do like it though and would be willing ...
Dec 21, 2013 -
Re: What if the World fell to Robots? (W.W.R.) Chapter 2: Why must this happen to us all?
Hey Raven lord the first one made sense up to the comma placement. doesn't it make sense for "A plate of cookies and brownies rested on top of it drool ...
Dec 21, 2013