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This is a beautiful and optimistic text. Wow it was good and I feel better after reading it. This is a good poem. 1. It provokes thought 2. It makes ...

I think your story was good. But i found that first person was rather weak. I think if you rewrote it in third person it would be more powerful. I'm ...

"Have you ever been so nervous that your stomach ties in knots and your mouth starts to taste odd and your palms start to get a bit moist and sweaty? ...

Hi, I really enjoyed this poem. You've captured the theme of adolescence and the subsequent feeling of disillusionment. Even without knowing the context of the poem, I am able to ...

I actually enjoyed this story. I think it was really good how you wrote in third person- third person has a lot of flexibility and shows a mature style of ...