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Re: Rise
This is a beautiful and optimistic text. Wow it was good and I feel better after reading it. This is a good poem. 1. It provokes thought 2. It makes ...
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Re: Black and Gray
I think your story was good. But i found that first person was rather weak. I think if you rewrote it in third person it would be more powerful. I'm ...
Sep 8, 2015 -
Re: This is a Love Story - Part 3
"Have you ever been so nervous that your stomach ties in knots and your mouth starts to taste odd and your palms start to get a bit moist and sweaty? ...
Sep 8, 2015 -
Re: Not Suitable For Children Under 12 Years
Hi, I really enjoyed this poem. You've captured the theme of adolescence and the subsequent feeling of disillusionment. Even without knowing the context of the poem, I am able to ...
Sep 8, 2015 -
Re: The Waiting Game
I actually enjoyed this story. I think it was really good how you wrote in third person- third person has a lot of flexibility and shows a mature style of ...
Sep 8, 2015