INTP

I liked this. One comment I would make would be to revise the first paragraph bit. Questions are good; they can draw in the reader, but the number and succession ...

I'm impressed with how much you managed to pack into 150 words. In fact, it almost reminded me of a poem in the way that it was short but I ...

I loved this poem. I can safely say that as I read this my mind took leave of my body and became one with the observer in the story. I ...

Overall, this poem not only gave me very vivid images but also emotions. I'm having a difficult time describing the feelings this poem gave me, so I'm not much help ...