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Re: Those Who Are Nameless: Prologue
I liked this. One comment I would make would be to revise the first paragraph bit. Questions are good; they can draw in the reader, but the number and succession ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: 150 Words of Fragility
I'm impressed with how much you managed to pack into 150 words. In fact, it almost reminded me of a poem in the way that it was short but I ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Of Fire and Shadow
I loved this poem. I can safely say that as I read this my mind took leave of my body and became one with the observer in the story. I ...
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: Ghost Train
Overall, this poem not only gave me very vivid images but also emotions. I'm having a difficult time describing the feelings this poem gave me, so I'm not much help ...
Jul 30, 2011