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Hehehe... I used to be really annoying... Now I'm just a little annoying... On the good days hehe. Although I was a pretty big hypocrite when I was little, people ...

Interesting, I couldn't help but wonder... On the part where you said something like "the crowd was silent, but it didn't say anything" did you mean that the fact that ...

Great! I love this, when you're done you should divide it into smaller chapters, till then, keep writing! I noticed some double negatives at the beginning, though... And a few ...

Great! Loved it, can't wait for more! Being a terrible critic, I don't see anything wrong with it other than a few grammatical errors, things to be rephrased, and the ...

Great! Interesting... Sounds kind of like Sundays at Tiffany's or whatever it was... I actually haven't read or seen it but I get the general idea of that story... But, ...

Great! Loved it. I sorta want to know what happens after that but in some stories it's simply better not knowing. Great writing. If it were to be a full ...

GREAT! I'm not a very good critic and I guess that's why I didn't see any problems, but I thought it was pretty good. I'm guessing that if you want ...