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Heey, You need to press enter some more. Ireally do like your use of words. Beautiful sentences ;) Greetz, Xx

Heej, Really like it, but maby you could be a bit less misterious. Because some people would not understand. But if that's what you want, you are doing great! Really ...

Heej, This is great! You really captured the fear of human. To be forgotten. No tips from me tho, just loved your work ;) Greetz, Xx

Heej, You have captured the exact feeling of the heart. This is just great! I can't think of any tips to give you. Go on like this is my only ...

Heej! Well thank you! I'm sorry it is sunday already.. :X I broke my promise, but I had something wrong with my hand wich made it hard to type or ...

Heey, thx so much! I really hope you will be reading my whole story to the end!

Heey! Thank you for the comment! I am pleased you liked the start of my story. Also, thx for the tips I will start paying attention to my grammar faults ...

Heey! Thank you for the comment! I am pleased you liked the start of my story. Also, thx for the tips ;)