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Re: Hellfire chapter 4
Hi! I love these kinds of stories. :) I just wanted to give you a review. So, first off, I enjoy the fact that you used first person. A lot ...
Jun 6, 2012 -
Re: The Listener
This is really nice. I enjoy the fact you put this in a different perspective than what normal people see it as. I do the exact same thing as you ...
Jun 5, 2012 -
Re: Chroma - Chapter 1
Can the authors leave their own reviews on their stories? Well, I guess I'll find out. Well, me, looks like you've written a story with two stereotypical characters. You've got ...
Jun 4, 2012 -
Re: Shiny (1)
Hey, I like this! My only complaint is that there should be longer sentences in some places, just to keep the story going and the transitions right. As in the ...
Jun 4, 2012 -
Re: Fallen
Hi! I'm going to give you a detailed review as much as I can. :) First things first, you have a lot of typos. Some of them are in the ...
Jun 3, 2012 -
Re: The Dream Catcher - Prologue.
I like this already! I'm going to write this review as I go on. I like the introduction, it's a nice, homey feel, setting up probably for some sort of ...
Jun 3, 2012