HorseradishCares

I...don't like the word "encompass" in this, and what does "like the surface of my touch is smooth"? The rest of it is better than before, but the ending ruins ...

Hibiscus~~~~ I could have, really, added more action. I'll do that next time--maybe when I write a sequel. Ooooh. Wouldn't that be fun? And it was extremely happy, which is ...

The kid stuffs soft toys full of cement and bribes people! I...could see her swearing, haha.

:) Thank you so much!

Well thank you! And, by the way, that sentence made total sense. ;) Actually, most of my poetry is based off dreams I've had over the years. I had this ...