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Re: Hunter - chapters one and two
Dear EM8650, I LOVE the story, if there's one thing you're great at, it's putting a picture in my mind. I can see all of the twists and turns that ...
Sep 5, 2020 -
Re: The Crowded Mountain (1)
Dear Editor, I see you have used they alot, maybe a little bit too much, an ulturnitive that you could use is, their name/s or just find a different way ...
Sep 5, 2020 -
Re: where will you stay, where will you make your home
Hello Alliyah This is an amazing story. It describes how the person is feeling and how they like to follow the map that's written in front of them and not ...
Oct 16, 2019 -
Re: Little Red Riding Hood
Hey May This is an amazing story. Its cool how you have used an older fairy tail added a twist and made it new. There is obviously something magic about ...
Oct 11, 2019 -
Re: .
Hey Stellar, You are a really good author. You made it so that I could actually picture what was going on. In a way it tells a lesson. Kind of ...
Oct 8, 2019