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  • Other » General, General Re: Doppelgangers

    Hey, so I'm Izon and I'ma review your work here... I like it. I do. It's a nifty idea... but I feel like it could flow a lot better. I ...

    Sep 30, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: You

    So hey, I'm Izon and I'm going to review these pieces for you. After the first read, I found them to be somewhat aesthetically displeasing. Of course, like all literature, ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Random Choice of Poems

    Hey, I'm Izon and I'm going to review your poems. From the initial reading, I really enjoyed your poetry and I believe you have strong talent. With a little TLC, ...

    Sep 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Soldier's Lullaby

    Hey there, ancientforever. I'm Izon, and I'm going to do a quick review of your poem. Truth is... I like it. I like its simplicity and its attitude. But I ...

    Sep 24, 2011


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