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HopelessRealist

  • Poetry » General, General Re: One and One

    It has always been a concern of mine when poets feel the need to extend the appearance of a poem by moving words into little patterns. However, now this is ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Umbrella

    The story here is both powerful and reflective. You adopt a poem-like approach to the way you tell the story which is admirable and well attempted. I as you are ...

    Jul 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Girl of Sunshine

    Touching, graceful and powerful. But enough about me... The poem is well structured with enjambement used to convey a flow of feelings and emotions. I am grateful that the young ...

    Jul 14, 2014


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