HopelessAbandon

Thank you so much for that last part, that's something I struggle with a lot! :)

Haha, I'm sorry, I didn't want to make you feel like you had to review anything of mine!I'll make sure to let you know when I post another chapter, just ...

Yep, I have two different characters. :0 The first chapter was from my girl main's point of view, Lana, and this one is from Hudson's point of view.

The chapter is called Lana, because that's the name of the main character. :) Thank you for the review!!

Thanks for this! This really helped. :D

I have another chapter up, if you want to read more! Thanks for the review!

Wow. This is pretty long, so I'm not going to tackle this review quite yet. Just a suggestion, I might try reposting it broken up into sections, so that its ...

Well, I need to reread chapter one haha. I really like this!! :D

Thanks bunches!! :D

Haha, yep. There's a little bit more description, but more comes later. The main characters are kind of in the throughs of action right now, so they don't list off ...

Thank you! :)

Thanks so much! :D

I'm definitely going to be doing a lot of editing to this chapter, thank you for the review!! You're right, it is a bit confusing, something that I can hopefully ...

Thank you so much, your reviews are really helpful! I'll be going back and editing this chapter soon, and I'll be adding a lot more to that section, hopefully making ...

Oops! I meant to have a name at the top of the chapter. It's Hudson, thank you for letting me know that. I'm not sure if I have a description ...