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Re: Alice: Chapter One
One: Drifting Alice watched out the window. Watched seemed awkward, maybe you could replace it with gazed, peered, or even, simply, looked. It was raining hard, soaking every flower and ...
Jan 29, 2010
One: Drifting Alice watched out the window. Watched seemed awkward, maybe you could replace it with gazed, peered, or even, simply, looked. It was raining hard, soaking every flower and ...
Jan 29, 2010