HomelessPorcupine

Hi Amazon Explorer! First off, I like that this first chapter started off right away with conflict. The parents want to move, but Annie doesn't. Then I like how the ...

Hello Raven! :) To start off, I have not read any of the previous chapters of this work. Due to this, I won't be mentioning anything in my review about ...

Hello ThingRed! :D First off, I LOVE the idea of the story. I especially love mythology and ´´creation stories´´, so that right there just tells you that I already like ...

Well I usually don't enjoy reading stories in First Person because I'm not used to it, but I slugged through it just for you Stella! Not that it wasn't good ...

'Ello Rosey! I like the story you have going on here, though parts of it are confusing. I think that my favorite thing about your writing is the relationships between ...

Hi Audy! I enjoyed reading this! Haha the surprises at the end were great and well placed - it makes me excited to see twists so well placed! :D It ...

Hi Jennya! So I'm finishing up the review now. The main thing I like about this story you have going is the flow. I'm not sure what the actual technical ...

Hello Jalmoc! It's been a while since I've read fantasy and it felt refreshing to read this! Something that I liked about this peace was the action in it. I ...

Hey Josh! So I'm going to skip with the usual preamble and dive right into the review! It had taken only four questions to spook the reclusive veteran ; the ...

Hey DeadEnds!! I know that I said I would review this earlier, and I'm really sorry that I didn't! I'm here now though, and I'm glad that I'm able to ...

Hey Daniel! I don't think that I've met you yet, so welcome to YWS!! :D So I think that this story is cute. A lot of readers will be able ...

Greetings Dead Gal, it's a pleasure to meet you! I'm HP and I'll be your reviewer for today! So since this is just an excerpt, I won't go all in ...

Hello Maki-Chan! I'm HP, and I'll be your reviewer for today! So first, before I get to the meat of the review, I wanted to say that I like your ...

Hey Baywolf, I showed up this time! :P So before I get started I just want to say that I agree with Kaf about the tone of this story. By ...

Hey Yoyo and welcome to YWS!!! I'm HP and I'll be your reviewer today! :D So first off, I want to say that this sounds like the beginning of an ...