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Whoa. That was intense! I love it! I love your descriptions. I don't think I found a single mis-spelled words. Your grammar was, almost entirely, perfect. I only found a ...

Wow! I thought this was really good! Nice! I only found one thing I didn't like. In the poem, instead of "you," "u" was written. It just seems low-quality. So, ...

Whoa! Very gripping! Once you actually get to the beginning, you don't want to stop reading! Wonderful! I LOVE IT. It's very original, and I've never heard of a hellwolf, ...

Whoa. This is one of the few slow-starting stories that have really gripped me. Your characters seem real, your grammar is nearly flawless, and so is your spelling. This is ...

Um, sort of interesting, but kind of redundant. He continually kisses her neck over and over again, which seems sort of like a time filler. If some guy kissed my ...

Grammar. Grammar, grammar, grammar. I would have liked to enjoy it more, but the grammar was so patchy that it took away from the story. I hate to say this, ...

Oh, how to begin this review? You did wonderful! There is a lot to say that you did great- I love your descriptions, smooth wording, etc. But there are also ...

Wow... that was awesome! I love all your descriptions, and the beginning had a nice punch to it. I'm even the kind of person who likes to skim over things ...

It's a very good story, all in all. It's just not the thing that I normally would read. I love the plot, but I'm not the kind of reader to ...

It's a pretty good story, all in all. Nice concept, very cute! It was pretty great. I only noticed one thing I didn't like. You seem to have fallen into ...