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It isn't for everybody I guess. This was experimental. I started this with my mum when we were just being silly on holidays, but I decided to continue it. It ...

This is updated - 3rd version now. There's a lot of new stuff, some old stuff chucked out and plenty of changes. Please review if you've got the time. Thanks ...

I just updated this. The next chapter I'm posting (5) features Eric (who used to be called George) so I thought I'd put the latest version of the prologue up.

Yes I remember you - The awesome reviewer! Thanks for the critique. Looks like I don't have as much work to do on this one. That sounds about right because ...

I would be very surprised if anyone had as much fun reading this as I did writing it (I was rolling on the floor for some of it). Sorry about ...

Alllllllllrighty then. This could do with some reworking. I'll get onto it as soon as I finish making some changes to chapter 1. And stop saying sorry Midnight. :D

Thank you Midnight, don't feel bad about being late. Dream helped me out in the meantime so I've been editing taking into account her advice. I'll be on holiday next ...

Well... I have gone hunting many times because I live in the country. We don't skin and eat anything though, and only hunt rabbits and foxes. Basically we shoot them, ...

Wow, amazing what other people can see. I hadn't noticed those plot holes, thanks for pointing them out. Sounds like I've got a lot to patch up. I foolishly edited ...

I've updated this. Please could someone give me a little constructive criticism this time.

Thanks for your help Dream I don't really want to change the POV. Arthur is meant to be the main character, even though there's a bit of overlap. I think ...

Thanks Dreamworx95 for the review you described as "harsh" The harsher the better. Expose my story's every weakness, that's the best way for me to improve it; You have to ...

You know too much :evil: I thank you for taking all that time to find information for me, but this story isn't about military tactics or supply lines. Its about ...

A main character in a situation like Agincourt, clearly on the french side would be doomed for the slaughter and would not be removed from the field for probably 10-12 ...

Thanks everyone for the advice. I'll seriously consider everything you've said for my third draft (Yes, what you see is my second draft. I'd rather post a photo of myself ...