Hibiscus

So... I liked it, but it was weird? It was confusing to me, and there are so many analogies and so much symbolism that it's hard to take it all ...

So...I wasn't logged in when I read this a minute or two ago...and I was gonna be lazy and not comment at all. But then I thought about how your ...

I guess the Harry Potter books were a part of my childhood, but I wasn't never so fully involved and in love with them as others I know are and ...

I really like this poem. Usually I get bored with long poems, but this one I didn't mind it being long. I really liked it... I loved the details and ...

So I thought I wasn't going to like this poem (no offense), when I began reading the first stanza. Why didn't I listen? Just wait to hear you out? Because ...

This was so good. Very... different and strange, but I definitely liked the writing style a lot. I actually went to that website and did a lot of those exercises. ...

Well, I think this poem needs some work. I thought it was very...unique, different. It was interesting because it was different, but at the same time it was kind of ...

The bird in my chest Is thrusting Against the ivory Of my rib cage The noise Of its fear Unables my thoughts And I Like the bird Thrust against The ...

I just have to say I really reallly really liked that. I love poems like these that really have so much life and character to them, as if they were ...

This makes me think of my own parents fighting. I think this is a good poem... I don't know, I want to say you could spice it up more, but ...

So I liked the majority of the poem, but I think you could have made it a bit clearer as to what you were trying to say. Or maybe I ...

I LOVED THIS. OMG!!! but don't you think that maybe when I walk into school tasting metal I feel more mortal than you ever have? This was my favorite line ...

My name's Kathryn and spelled like that, and although I do not know you, I feel almost as if it were directed at me. Lol. Which actually gave me shivers ...

I liked the first poem, it actually sent shivers down my spine. The only thing I had a problem with was this line, as old age creeps in like lead ...