Hiadel

Here and there my family brings back the game momentarily, but we haven't been dedicated to it since like 3 years ago. Its fun.

Wow, that's the kinda review I like! This was kinda a good fantasy of mine, so I probably misstepped when I made her assume my name. I wasn't out just ...

HAAHAHAHAHAHAH! That is so funny. :smt031 Hey Hiadel, RABBIT RABBIT RABBIT! Gotcha! :D The Minister of High Hopes Its not the first of the month........

Thanks for taking time to look at this. I'm glad that some of you were able to enjoy this. :D Thanks for the reviews!

That's a better idea. Don't really want to confuse with the teacher on this story... I just went ahead and changed him to a man, so we are all good. ...

It's supposed to be the girl sitting across the room. The chapstick was supposed to be the main giveaway in that last part.

Yeah, I really dig this. I like the opening parts with the burning and all. Made me scratch my wrist more than once. :lol:

I've got to say that this is one of the best pieces of poetry I've read in a long time. It's so drawing and gripping. It entices from start to ...

There are typos! Correct them when you get up. :) If this letter, on the other hand, is intended for the girl of his dreams... well... it's really quite creepy! ...

Thanks for the insight and advice! I greatly appreciate it!

Ok, so here is the story again with revisions- I get up every morning and work my way through long corridors flanked by large portraits and sculptures. I am the ...

Thanks! I find that a very helpful review.

Made my heart warm up. All I could visualize was warmth in my heart. Keep up the good work!

Well Done! I really like the way you use the nosebleed in the story. Im not sure what else to say about your story that hasn't already been covered, but ...