HiBye300

Thanks! And a good day to you!

Yeah, thanks. And yeah, I figure out the sound of the waterfall sometime soon, and lol.

Yeah, I'll probably do that sometime, this is just something I did when I had spare time and I wanted to write. Thanks for the advice!

Thanks!

Thanks! There are different ways to interpret this, but yeah, it does show a bridge between reality and fantasy, but there are also other secret messages in it.

Thanks, and yeah, I agree with the sound thing, I didn't want the waterfall to sound "crashing", because I originally envisioned it as one of those small spring waterfalls, so ...

Thanks, I'm going to have to do some editing in the near future.

Yeah, sorry about that. And I know what stanzas are, I didn't know what to do with this really.