HessicaJolt

I like this. It has such an innocence behind it that leaves me smiling! The last poem put me in a dark mood, and this one completely lifted my spirit. ...

This most definitely has potential. I loved the ending, finding out that his killer was the girl he loved. This just HAS to be expanded and made into a more ...

So I agree with the rest of them that this story could be a lot better with the help of more details on the characters. Maybe even more interesting with ...

This actually gave an in-depth story to what I think the song is all about! Totally awesome! I wish I could forget it, so I could read it again. I ...

This reminded me of my best friend/boyfriend; Whom I love oh so much. Great job! I don't see anything grammar wise that you could change. The detailing was great, but ...

Great idea for a poem, I liked it very much. :] The only thing I suggest is making it flow more fluently ...if you get what I'm saying. When reading ...

I really like this poem. Its dramatic and was crafted very well. There are no changes that I would make in this poem, I like it the way it is. ...