Hereitstarts

first things first, what a beautifully written piece. I loved the descriptive language and the suspense as you got further down, waiting on some horrifically intricate and personal question. I ...

HEY! loved this, I myself have quite a soft spot for creepy, fairy tales so this was right up my alley. I suppose .I should get the critics over with ...

wow! loved this poem, I like the simplicity it seems to over, I believe the very simple language throughout just amplifies the descriptions of the mothers eyes as everything else ...

woah this poem really got to me, I have no critique apart from some punctuation needed so the reader knows how to go about reading it. Other than that its ...