Henox

Thanks for the review! You do have a point with your arguments. I know a story should always have a conflict, but i found it impossible to put it in ...

Thanks for the review (: You're right about Bionicle having a big influence on this, but some things are just coincidence. Mangians, didn't come from magna, and when I made ...

Heyy! Nice story, a little pessimistic though... I noticed some things in your writing that are not quite right: You wrote: a girl and a boy and it's love... a ...

Hey! Thanks for the review! The thing about the plot going fast, I wasn't sure if it was good or bad. I'ts much easier for me to do it this ...

Thank you for the review! When I started writing this I really wanted to make something unique, I wanted to make everything form scratch. I'll try to explain more things ...