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Re: Fallen Down
That was really awesome! :) It flows really well and I didn't want to stop reading! I agree with RoachRedford!; It's be cool to extend it further than that.
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: Hear me cry
I do like it, but I agree with Crescent, really reminds me of quite a lot of different songs, but still good! :)
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: A Kiss Without Lips
That was so touching, and really means something to me, as that perfectly describes something I know very well. Anyway the words were flawless and perfect, every line was full ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: What Sarah Said
This was really, really amazing, it gave me goosebumps and I thought I was going to cry! It was really fluid and easy to read, and just so beautiful, I ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Illusion
Wow. That's all I can say! It's breathtaking. It's really, really beautiful. I love it. You so should seek out publishing it! Good luck!
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: The pretense of a happy family
Thank you very much everyone, I've edited all of the grammar mistakes and your suggestions in the original document, so thank you very much :D [/color][/color][/color] And.. Just one question ...
Jul 31, 2011
